How Do I love Thee?
She lies dormant
Beside me
A heavenly apparition
Certain to drive
Roman goddesses
Green with envy
Her ebony hair
All fluttered
Cheeks, milky and undisturbed
Lips like Cherry Wine
A Venus dimple on her chin
Skin, tender
As a new-born
Her slender curves
Accentuated
By her skin tight gown
Her breathing slow
But Steady
She wakes
To a familiar sight
A grin
She lets out a smile
Like a soft, white cloud
It melts my heart
At twenty paces
She drifts in to my arms
The Soft fragrance of her hair
Dissipates times of
Quite isolation
Pulling her self
To my ear
She whispers
Three words
Three words that
Bought me back
From after-life
OH
How Do I love Thee?
How much more?
PS: A series on how relationships begin all gracious & gay, only to end in hate & remorse. Part I.
Beside me
A heavenly apparition
Certain to drive
Roman goddesses
Green with envy
Her ebony hair
All fluttered
Cheeks, milky and undisturbed
Lips like Cherry Wine
A Venus dimple on her chin
Skin, tender
As a new-born
Her slender curves
Accentuated
By her skin tight gown
Her breathing slow
But Steady
She wakes
To a familiar sight
A grin
She lets out a smile
Like a soft, white cloud
It melts my heart
At twenty paces
She drifts in to my arms
The Soft fragrance of her hair
Dissipates times of
Quite isolation
Pulling her self
To my ear
She whispers
Three words
Three words that
Bought me back
From after-life
OH
How Do I love Thee?
How much more?
PS: A series on how relationships begin all gracious & gay, only to end in hate & remorse. Part I.
Labels: love, relationships, She
posted by Sandeep S at
September 19, 2008
12 Comments:
It is simple and beautiful!!! Wow!!!
Beautifully writn.. especially this post best among the 4 :)
very nice indeed...i think u were describing how u see ur lady love..and how u want ur mornings to be when u wake up next to ur dear one.....keep dreaming...because they often come true.....
sheer genius
Brilliant piece of work!
Amazingly written.. Lovely!!
Merci. And, Hello by the way.
Hello indeed.. Well a bit late, but I decided to make an untimely visit :)
Such amazing feelings, such amazing words.. yet no more than 10 posts on your blog.. You seriously need to do more writing.. On public demand ;)
untimely visits are most appreciated! The thankings! :)
public huh? i look around & see only you. hehe..
You see me... Enough reason to write more I guess :P
When I make untimely visits I need to find something new right.. :0)
ohhkayy. well, the thing is I think you are more of an on-the-fly-writer. I mean, something pops in your head, your hands shift gears & pen these thoughts down (i think).
Me, Im nowhere near you. It takes me eons (@ times) to get the first line right & not to forget the humpty number of edits & re-edits. Talk about workload!
yeah I just write what I feel like.. No edits, nothing..
For me thats the only way to write.. Reflect the mind even if its brutal..
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