if I said, 'I love you'
if I said, 'I love you',
will you ravish me with assent?
or propel me back into dreadful gloom,
with fantasies dispelled?
if I said, 'I love you',
will you choke me with glee,
in this void of suffering?
if I said, 'I love you',
would you lock me in embrace?
and let the hues of bliss,
rain down on me?
if I said, 'I love you',
would you wonder it were bona fide?
or deny me a simpleton,
amidst the cosmos?
if I said, 'I love you', today?
will you reckon it, tomorrow?
if I said, 'I love you',
would you hold my hand,
until the sun ages old,
and the stars turn cold?
if I said, 'I love you',
will you love me once & for all?
and all for once?
if I said, 'I love you',
what would you do?



7 Comments:
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A beautiful poem. :)
Hey U...so beautiful and profound...more importantly hope you did more than just pen it. Lots of love
Thank you, Chandrika! Didnt know there were fellow bloggers reading my blog :) hehehe
hola priyaech!! thought you were lost some where in the wild bushes of where ever it is you are [I keep thinking of Namibia. Yes? No? hehe :)]
merci! nah, just penning it down is what I can do at this time. :) TC
Descriptive and beautifull !!!
A lovely, touching one.. scripted so beautifully.. :) loved it..!!!
appreciating, madhu! :)
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