Monday, August 9, 2010

if I said, 'I love you'



if I said, 'I love you',

will you ravish me with assent?
 or propel me back into dreadful gloom,
  with fantasies dispelled?

if I said, 'I love you',
 will you choke me with glee,
  in this void of suffering?

if I said, 'I love you',
 would you lock me in embrace?
  and let the hues of bliss,
   rain down on me?

if I said, 'I love you',
 would you wonder it were bona fide?
  or deny me a simpleton,
   amidst the cosmos?

if I said, 'I love you', today?
 will you reckon it, tomorrow?

if I said, 'I love you',
 would you hold my hand,
  until the sun ages old,
  and the stars turn cold?

if I said, 'I love you',
 will you love me once & for all?
  and all for once?

if I said, 'I love you',
 what would you do?

7 Comments:

Blogger Chandrika said...

:)
A beautiful poem. :)

September 23, 2010 at 4:11 AM  
Blogger Priya Kurup Premkumar said...

Hey U...so beautiful and profound...more importantly hope you did more than just pen it. Lots of love

September 24, 2010 at 8:20 AM  
Blogger Sandeep S said...

Thank you, Chandrika! Didnt know there were fellow bloggers reading my blog :) hehehe

September 24, 2010 at 11:24 PM  
Blogger Sandeep S said...

hola priyaech!! thought you were lost some where in the wild bushes of where ever it is you are [I keep thinking of Namibia. Yes? No? hehe :)]

merci! nah, just penning it down is what I can do at this time. :) TC

September 24, 2010 at 11:26 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Descriptive and beautifull !!!

November 24, 2010 at 10:33 AM  
Blogger Unknown said...

A lovely, touching one.. scripted so beautifully.. :) loved it..!!!

December 18, 2010 at 12:24 PM  
Blogger Sandeep S said...

appreciating, madhu! :)

December 18, 2010 at 12:27 PM  

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