Wednesday, June 30, 2010

LoVe & HaTe





                                            L ustful & divine, to some
                                 O dious & demonic, to others
                                 V ices & vanity, burn
                                 E xistence without, unbeknownst
                                                   
                                                    &

                                 H avoc & sin, it breeds
                                 A nguish & death, it screams
                                 T ruth & tears, drown
                                 E xistence with, celebrated



Another of the miserable attempts with an acrostic poem. *sigh*

10 Comments:

Blogger Soumya said...

Ehh what to say, what to say.. Hmmmm, I guess the word I'm looking for is err, "Interesting"!

July 1, 2010 at 9:17 AM  
Blogger Sandeep S said...

Ehh, hmmmm, err all bespeak of too much apprehension & then DANG - interesting! :)

merci but!

July 1, 2010 at 11:50 AM  
Blogger Soumya said...

Okay just one question. Wanting to ask since long.. Whats with all the high funda language you use? Not this one but the others I guess.. Sure is different, but the reader needs to have some sorta degree to get to the meaning of the post..

Trying to be educational, are we? :)

July 1, 2010 at 12:23 PM  
Blogger Sandeep S said...

since long? haha..well, you ain't the first one who has asked me that cos I have had some one from my own blood line do that & you won't be the last either.

i guess im obsessed with the "never heard before" words aaaanndd i think it gives me a certain 'high' when i get to use them when writing.

July 1, 2010 at 12:40 PM  
Blogger Soumya said...

Ah ha... Good for you then.. Honestly, no complaints.. Probably this is the only place where my brain gets exercise :D

N btw look, which other blog got a dramatic change :P

July 1, 2010 at 12:46 PM  
Blogger Sandeep S said...

danke! i'd say that your brain is over exercised with everything that goes on your head. Stark raving mad, i say, the way the grey matter of yours works! DAMN! :)

dramatic? nah..i like wolves [one of my favs] & so the moment i laid eyes on this theme, i just couldn't help but download. and this lone wolf kinda resembles me, metaphor-i-caly o'course! and at this time im reminded of what you said - at the end of it all, we stand ALONE! :)

July 1, 2010 at 12:58 PM  
Blogger Soumya said...

Stark raving mad?? Danke! I say :)

Wolf eh? Kinda wild like the lioness ;).. Oh yeah, in the end we all stand alone.. Be it the wolf, the lioness or even a tiny mouse..

July 1, 2010 at 9:51 PM  
Blogger Sandeep S said...

the welcomings!! totally wild. well, im not too sure about the mouse part cos they tend to have really huge families so techincally they ain't all alone!! hehe :)

July 2, 2010 at 11:36 AM  
Blogger Soumya said...

Sheesh.. Now thats a sucky sense of humour :P :P

July 3, 2010 at 10:33 PM  
Blogger Sandeep S said...

yah i know! what's life without a lil sucky sense of humour :P

July 4, 2010 at 7:34 AM  

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